Monday, August 15, 2011



Young Love

What’s more intriguing 
than a young girl’s infatuation?
Feelings intense, feeling’s that sing.
A young girl’s love is a beautiful thing.

But like a bird learning to fly
the temptation arises to see how high.
Never knowing what she’ll meet up there.
The eagles, hawks and all who share
the majesty and brilliance 
of the high open air.
A realm designated from the start
for the fearless, the noble 
and strong of heart.

The young girl tests her wings of love,
fluttering quickly like those of a dove.
An eagle swoops down, smooth and fast.
That adventure ends, maybe her last.

So listen well, you sweet young things.
Love is a mystery that softly sings
of a promise as vast and big as the sky
but more often than not
leaves you to cry.



True Love

The waves are pounding down below me.
The sun disappears setting the night free.
Darkness enhances campfires up and down
like glowing diamonds on a black background.

A warm wind blows into my face
coming off the sea from a distant place.
I smile to myself, contentedness surrounds me.
I ponder it’s meaning staring out at the sea.

My gaze drifts up to the distant city lights
edging the shoreline like a necklace that delights
an eternal goddess standing proud and sure
whose breath is the wind, an enticing lure.



Forgotten Love 

So, who writes poems 
for the ugly forlorn?
Eye’s radiantly dull,
skin blemished and worn.

Lips full but cankered
waiting to be kissed.
Love is the mystery
they always missed.

Blind dates forever
who never show.
A glimpse from a doorway
then off they go.

Tired clichés
about the beauty within
never made it happen
but said with a grin

and that look
they always denied.
The look of pity
by all who have lied

about this wonderful thing 
they love to call love.
Given to the beautiful
from somewhere above.



Sketch and poems by Dave Holloway



5 comments:

  1. I got hooked and read several of your poems this morning. The three abut love are very real and well written, but going through the some of the others, I see you are full of passion for what is right. You've put your thoughts to verse quite handily.

    Here's my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/

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  2. Thanks Charles. I don't know if I'm full of passion for what is right. In this day and age it's hard telling what right is.

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  3. i am glad i chose yours to read today... i will stop by more! awesome!

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  4. Very pretty reflections on the various forms of love.

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