Saturday, August 20, 2011

A Day at the Park

You find a quiet place to park
at the park, shady and serene
and wouldn’t you know it,
some trashed out, poor man’s 
pimped out Chevy pulls in
beside you, speakers blasting
a gravelly devil-Vader sound
in full profanity absurd, making
you wonder the worms that squirm
in the drivers brain you fail to
acknowledge for who knows
what impending legalities await
such a glance.

So you drive to the other side
of the park and once again
find a shady silence till the
‘happy-for-no-reason’ crew
pulls in and loosens a half dozen
screeching toddlers who seem
to think your car is a playground
attachment so you quickly pull out, 
cautiously, and look
for another shady spot but find
none and you end up sitting 
in the quiet, blaring sun

thanking your god
for another glimpse 
into the 21st century.


by Dave Holloway

7 comments:

  1. Awesome write, Dave! Really vivid and real. I felt like I was in the passenger seat.

    my week 8 story: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/18/amber-waves-of-grain/

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  2. Thanks Charles. In a weird way I think both our stories are saying the same thing.

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  3. "devil-Vader sound" <------ LOVE THIS! It is truly sad that it's getting harder and harder to find a place just to have some peace and quiet...

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  4. Sometimes all one really wants is some peace and quiet...but the 21st century won't allow it :( It's a riot out there.

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