Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Rule of Thumb 

The lesson giver, 
exasperated,
insisted we heed
the narrow way trailing
what we already learned
the hard way,
the loser’s way,

the only way 
is
there’s six billion sides
to every way
and twelve billion eyeballs
rolling.

 * * * *

I suppose
there’s an exception
to every rule
because every rule
was once an exception.

“Hey!” the furry one said,
“we don’t have to kill them”
hence,
‘Thou shalt not kill’

with exceptions of course.


3 comments:

  1. Dear Dave

    Very exceptional ... I really enjoyed reading your verse.. so intricately designed with one line overshadowing the following lines thought and essence...

    Thanks for joining in the poetry potluck this week, which I hosted for the first time this week....

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-cuckoos-song-and-smell-of-love.html
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  2. Well done Dave truly, very insightful

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