Rule of Thumb
The lesson giver,
exasperated,
insisted we heed
the narrow way trailing
what we already learned
the hard way,
the loser’s way,
the only way
is
there’s six billion sides
to every way
and twelve billion eyeballs
rolling.
* * * *
I suppose
there’s an exception
to every rule
because every rule
was once an exception.
“Hey!” the furry one said,
“we don’t have to kill them”
hence,
‘Thou shalt not kill’
with exceptions of course.
Dear Dave
ReplyDeleteVery exceptional ... I really enjoyed reading your verse.. so intricately designed with one line overshadowing the following lines thought and essence...
Thanks for joining in the poetry potluck this week, which I hosted for the first time this week....
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Thanks Shashi
ReplyDeleteWell done Dave truly, very insightful
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