Homeless Dawn
The black gives way
to ever brightening
shades of gray.
Reflections of orange,
yellow ray
off the underbelly
of a lingering storm.
Five new mosquito bites
matching the hours
of uninterrupted sleep
as the commuter traffic
grows and growls
ever so loud
and a light wind remnant
of a car rocking blow,
five hours ago
gives pause and praise
to a homeless dawn.
vivid imagery, love the color contrasts you use, keep it up.
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This piece really tugs at my heartstrings, and perfectly captures the day I spent sleeping under a highway... excellent beautiful job.
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ReplyDeleteFrankly ... this is an amazing piece.
ReplyDeleteVery well done. A vivid picture of reality.
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