Thursday, May 26, 2011

The Front Line

In a muddy trench
my enemy breathes
the hurried breath.
Hearts pounding,
awareness too quick,
no time to fear
or even get sick.

What he feels about me
I feel about him
but right’s on my side
I think to myself
as he thinks the same
to his righteous self.

Four eyes revere 
a neutral sky.
The dice are thrown.
A life will die.

Every bit as full
and valid you see
and I’m just thankful
it wasn’t me.


by Dave

3 comments:

  1. really moving piece thank you

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  2. I know you know Dave.
    Throwing dice or bombs ...

    Thanks for posting my friend

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  3. dang nice second verse there...the reality of war, each thinking they are right and only one will win and walk away thinking he was.

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