
Babies
I fathered babies
and gave them my love,
believing them to be
gifts from above,
receiving in return
wonder and awe,
and glimpsing a heaven
without a flaw
where purity and innocence
blends to mesmerize
with stunning clarity
through big brown eyes
and luminous black pupils,
like mirrors they shine,
capturing without effort
every curious mind,
answering without words
every question we find,
flashing ancient secrets
like a neon sign
but mostly I remember
just changing diapers.
but mostly I remember
just changing diapers.
by Dave
receiving in return
ReplyDeletewonder and awe,
and glimpsing a heaven
without a flaw
kids do think we are flawless...well for a little while.
http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2011/10/13/son/
how delightful,
ReplyDeleteyour love for the baby is divine.
fun word flow.
Thanks and yes and we think they're flawless too.
ReplyDeleteThen of course they grow up.
Ah, that is beautiful. And the more so because it is a father's words.
ReplyDeleteamazing,
ReplyDeletea voice from a real father, well done.
I liked the flow of that, and the cute little ending. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteJamie
This is so true. The joy and the sorrow of both fatherhood and motherhood. There is no escaping some of the bitter along with the exultation. Well done ...
ReplyDeleteNamaste,
Isadora
Ha-ha-ha! What a good daddy.
ReplyDeleteHad to laugh, Dave. Good job!
ReplyDeleteCute! Such a sweet tribute, though I had to laugh at the last line :-)
ReplyDeleteExcellent tribute....heartfelt writing...Thanks for share
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